what i learned from my first essay*

I found out the toughness of IB grading--I never expected to get a C for my essay. I learned to take good care of using the right words--one word could make a difference and change the meaning of the entire paragraph or essay. Therefore, I think I should revise everything twice in case a 'wrong' word affected the entire meaning of the essay. Also, I've learned to structure my paragraph properly, and use a road map for the introduction to guide the rest of the essay.

-- yuki